It seems I cannot stop taking courses, or at least some courses–those dealing with art, literature, poetry, music. Perhaps the reason has something to do with the fact that from about 7:30 to 5 for five days a week, I teach math. And not just any math, but mostly math to teenagers who hate it, think they cannot do it, and complain considerably. I try to “save” them, inspire them, help them to see math’s usefulness in regular, ordinary adult life. Sometimes I succeed and sometimes….
My new poetry class started today, but it is very different from anything I previously studied. I am supposed to read and learn how to write prose poems. Now if I can just figure out exactly what is a prose poem versus, let’s say, flash fiction or memoir. I’ve read all the directions and a couple of Robert Bly prose poems and have decided it has a lot to do with imagery. This post is my first attempt. Still I am quite concerned that it is not really a prose poem and if not a prose poem, what is it. Please tell me.
She stands alone by the train tracks,
watching and waiting and dreaming.
Hobos no longer exist.
She remembers reading stories of life
when her great grandmother lived:
hobos begging for food, gypsies stealing
babies and telling fortunes, long days of
working in the corn fields, chopping weeds.
Her own family praises modernity:
tractors, riding lawnmowers, herbicides, pesticides,
electricity, TVs, dishwashers, fast cars, fast food, diet sodas,
cell phones, computers, DVDs, iPADs.
Now the only excitement lays in video games,
guns, and sex. She watches and waits and dreams.
It sounds like a prose poem to me! It speaks to me.
For me, its prose poem – and how the world has changed. Well done, if I might add.
I write whatever flows from my heart and am not bothered by all the technical stuff > rhyme, rhythm, cadence, tone, timbre > impressive but means nothing for me. If it sounds right – its right. If it touches people – even if only you – you’re a poet.
To search out the oceans, one must leave the pond, I say.
Peace, Eric
I write and teach to make a difference so I guess it matters to me to reach beyond me. I left the pond when I was a kid, not necessarily intentionally but because I never belonged in a pond.
I don’t know either but I did enjoy your poem.
This poem sounds very nice to me. I want to take some poetry classes too. This is one thing that I used to love in school but somehow left once I picked up science as my major.
Ponds tend to be so small! I like this very much Juliana. Thank you.
Rita at Spirituality Without Borders