What I learned from these poems: what is usually considered good writing for other types of poems may or may not apply to haiku. Alliteration provides an example. Generally, in poetry alliteration merits a plus. Not in haiku. Regardless, I decided to leave the alliteration in this poem. When I eliminated the alliteration, the effect I wanted disappeared.
red roan horse runs
deep depression in mud
Generally, I teach senior English–British literature. However, one short class twice a week contains all freshmen. My assignment: teach them what they need to know to pass the state STAAR for ELA. This poem illustrates what occurred during the class this past week.
teaching freshmen English class
What is a pronoun?
they stare; no one knows.
4 thoughts on “Haiku Adventure–Part Three”
Haha, love it! Brings back fond memories. 🙂
Honestly, I was shocked. They should have learned what a pronoun is years ago. It was one of those days: senior in another class asked me if I liked erotic literature.
OMG! Too funny!
Ah – freshmen — So smart; but so forgetful! Pronouns are probably taught in 3rd or 4th grade. I know we use to review them in 5th grade.